I'm gonna go ahead and say, yes, I'd love to read it. I have gotten through about half of Jack's Place, with comments. I like short(er) stories.

I'm always surprised when people want to share something they've just started. That's the kind of writing I usually don't want any comments on.

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how terribly exciting. I look forward to seeing what you do and don't like about Jack's Place. It's been a big struggle over several years to write that story, so every now and again, I just have to get away from it. I guess what I'm doing now is trying to get away from it, while still being productive on something else.

In some respects I guess I understand not wanting to show something til its finished, but on the other hand, if I show something along the way, then if someone has really good input or finds a huge glaring mistake, its a lot easier to fix than it would be if I'd built 200 pages on top of it. And if everyone says "this fucking sucks" then I may consider not wasting as much time on it. And of course, its not like I can't just ignore input that I don't find helpful.

So yeah, I really do appreciate anything that you have to say about either story.

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I'll read more :)

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I'll be posting it in a follow up post momentarilly...

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Sure, I'll do it.

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thank you, watch this space...

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Well, I've got far too much to do already, so I'd love a distraction from all of that crap. :) Count me in.

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Yes! I am a distraction! What more can a writer hope for!

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